2007年3月14日水曜日

start

It's my first blog.
I can write ceap English,so if you find mistake,please point me.

Today,I get substitute holiday.So,I challenged cooking.I made a curry and rice.Generally,It's easy to cook.But I mistake water amount.So Finished curry contains a lot of water...

But,fail is good experience.I'll try again!

2 件のコメント:

Kyoichi Iwasaki さんのコメント...

Hi, shin-san,

How are you? It's nice for you to begin with this blog! Please keep it in your own pace.

One point:
"finished is very watery curry..."
"finished" is an adjectif, and it might be better to change like...
"Finished curry contains a lot of water."
or
"I made a watery curry."

shin1226 さんのコメント...

Hi,Mr.kyoro1

Thank you for the indication.
I corrected the point.
My best regards in the future.